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alpacaman
is on page 134 of 336
There's a knock at the door. Two pages later, she opens the door.
134 pages in. Maybe 10 pages of actual story. This is shit.
— Feb 14, 2025 03:01AM
134 pages in. Maybe 10 pages of actual story. This is shit.
alpacaman
is on page 80 of 336
🙄 This is why I don't like first person perspectives, and this book has four of them. Long ass drawn out overly descriptive paragraphs. You could say it all in a sentence. So much padding already. It's a ⭐ at best so far.
— Feb 13, 2025 08:47AM

