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The setting and "magic" system are incredibly interesting (and creative!) but I just can't with random info dumping on world-building. To have one little detail from a scene explained we need to read paragraphs of summarised world history of the kingdom and it's not even a smooth transition. PLS BE BETTER.
— Feb 15, 2025 10:22AM

