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Jen swoons...
is 41% done
I do like this author but as with every series I really hope she gets a better editor. Her books have a lot of typos or grammar errors or wrong work (night instead of knight etc) which just kind of disrupts the flow.
— Feb 16, 2025 03:28PM
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Jen swoons...
is 72% done
Not sure how to rate this series. The editing is beyond sloppy. The story is good though. As a librarian though I could not recommend it in libraries because of the editing being pretty unprofessional. So I’ll probably rate it a 4 for story. 3 for the sloppiness and really just hope the author sees people want to like her work but needs to invest into the writing.
— Feb 16, 2025 08:17PM
