Ro0thie’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

I don’t even want to talk about it. It’s bad. The pacing is bad the gapping holes in the story for the sake of speeding through the plot. What’s worse is I love the characters and their interactions and the story is good. But wtf. either Rebecca has rushed this or her editors have gone ham on cutting out all character/plot development and left just plot. I have vocalised frustration often. Not pleased. 😡