Minty’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update

"Hey why is Xaden like....actually kinda vibing right now after we took him off the land that had a mass of expectations (and a ton of magic for those who know)? Fucking weird right?" GEE GUYS. I WONDER FUCKING WHY.

WHAT IS EDITING IN THIS COME ON. Doubled up actions in the same paragraph? Come on Yarros.

I'm bought in this far but woof it'll be a bit of a slog won't it. .-.