Mudaser Sabawoon’s Reviews > Savvy > Status Update

Inciting incident:The inciting incident in my book is When mibs is all excited for her savvy but then everything goes bad. Their father gets in a car crash and goes into a coma and has to go to the hospital, "When mama dropped the phone with a rattling clatter and a single sob perfectly devastated. She sank to the floor" this shows that this is the Main event that launches the main action.

Quest:At this point of the story I know that my book is a quest. Because Mibs is on an adventure because her dad is in the hospital. She thinks that her savvy can save her dad, On page 140 it says "My poppa needs me I said at last more to myself he needs me to get down there to save him. He is like sleeping beauty and I have to wake him up" This shows that she is on a mission to save her dad and she will do anything.

Visualize: One scene that I was able to visualize was when fish turned 13 and a big hurricane came and they have to evacuate and they had to drive as close to the middle of the country as possible because fish's savvy is on his birthday if he is close to a body of water a hurricane will form. That's why they are trying to get to the middle of the country so it doesn't happen again.