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Sage
Sage is 51% done
I would say, now that two women are having sex, the prose is at its lowest point. Suddenly each sentence's imagery is so hackneyed, blatant, and self-serious that I just want to give up. I'm yelling "avocados??????" I'm yelling "Noooooo!" This is probably the fastest I've turned on a book's prose despite being thrilled with the turn of events. An incredible fumble to achieve this
Mar 01, 2025 01:38AM
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Sage is 45% done
Enjoying it less...
Feb 28, 2025 11:30PM
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Sage
Sage is 30% done
Up my alley. Wonderful prose, some of my favorite themes, and plenty of weird, aggressive sexual tension between women.
Feb 27, 2025 12:19PM
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