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⋆⭑★ Kipp ★⭑⋆
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I've been getting back into poetry lately-
This was the first real poem I've written in awhile
Opinions?
Liar, liar, pants on fire
Your plan is bold
My pain is dire
With spiral eyes
And words bright red
Your choices left us cold and dead
When I take my leave
Soon they will too
The only question left,
Will you?
Go against your nature,
and do as you've said.
If I grow cold,
We'll all be dead
— Mar 06, 2025 07:12PM
This was the first real poem I've written in awhile
Opinions?
Liar, liar, pants on fire
Your plan is bold
My pain is dire
With spiral eyes
And words bright red
Your choices left us cold and dead
When I take my leave
Soon they will too
The only question left,
Will you?
Go against your nature,
and do as you've said.
If I grow cold,
We'll all be dead
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Mar 06, 2025 07:16PM
The last stanza is lwk gonna make me jump, I hate it so much.
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WOAH!! I really like it, mate!! The ABA, ABB, ABCD, & ABCB is a cool combination in the lines, I really like it, it meshes well!
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thank you all so much, y'all are too nice wtf😭🫶
Of coursee, we'd be nicee. You're our friend and your poetry is outrageously amazing.
