Pat’s Reviews > For the Plot > Status Update

So far it's very meh, I do not understand how these two people fell in love. There was little to no build up, and honestly if the chemistry was good it would not be an issue. But there is none. These people have nothing in common, she doesn't even like him that much and also there is no sexual tension, like zero. I think I'll give up on this one.

But the idea itself was not bad. Just... Something is missing...