mirror 🫧’s Reviews > The Spear Cuts Through Water > Status Update

i’m enjoying the line writing for this so far, but if i’m being honest i’m struggling with the plot. it doesn’t really entirely feel like there IS one yet, and somehow the vibes i got from the cover are very, very off from what we have so far. it’s not bad so far, exactly, but i don’t feel like i have a full grasp on anything at all yet.