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Elithanathile
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// Hmmm the sex scene leaves much to be desired :-/ - it was a very speedy cursory scene - but I'm holding out for greater upcoming new ones. Come on Lou, deliver a fantastic sex scene (or six ... ). Either way, the story makes up for it.
— Jul 18, 2016 07:18PM
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Elithanathile
is 46% done
// Okay. No. Just no. I'm done. I have absolutely NO desire to know what happens next after THAT just happened and after Heath did and said what he just did and said (to Miles) with Derick standing RIGHT THERE!! No interest AT ALL!! No, no, no!!! Want to know how to take a reader from REALLY digging a book to wanting to rip said book apart and heave it across the room? Read this. You'll find out quickly enough :-/.
— Jul 18, 2016 08:03PM
Elithanathile
is 46% done
// Annnnnnnnnnnnd this is where everything in this book went to shit. WHY did that have to happen? WHY?!!? It was going so well :-/!! Blech ... this leaves me with no desire to know what happens next. I mean, come on, Heath, grow a backbone! Miles, fucking GET LOST!! And Derick? Well, I have nothing to say to you because you've done nothing wrong. Just Aaaaagh!!!!! Book, redeem yourself. PLEASE!!!
— Jul 18, 2016 08:00PM
Elithanathile
is 37% done
// Okay, Derick, don't make me get annoyed at you for what initially annoyed me in the beginning :-/ [referring to first update].
— Jul 18, 2016 07:23PM
Elithanathile
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// "Bart came out with a steaming mug already in hand. "See what a thoughtful, sexy guy I am in the morning? A splash of milk and way too much sugar. Just the way you like it." "Thank you," Chloe said, then added, "Sexy? You're wearing Star Wars boxers." "I know," Bart said, waggling his brows. "Sexy ones." He paused. "Chloe," he said, adopting Darth Vader's voice, "I am not your father." ~ LMAO :-D!! ADORABLE!!!!!
— Jul 18, 2016 06:16PM
Elithanathile
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// Wow, Lou Kelly is definitely a story teller ... the scene he's describing is giving me the heebie-jeebies!! I agree with Derick ... Heath's fear in this case was his instinct trying to keep him safe O_O *biting nails*!!
— Jul 18, 2016 06:00PM
Elithanathile
is 18% done
// Okay I really REAAAALLY want to give Heath a massive bear hug right now :-(!!!
— Jul 18, 2016 05:43PM
Elithanathile
is 17% done
// UGH and I dislike Miles with a fiery passion >:-o!!!!
— Jul 18, 2016 05:40PM
Elithanathile
is 14% done
// Really enjoying this book so far :-)! Yay!!! P.S. I'm really liking Bart too, he's an awesome friend to Derick :-)!! Pssssst, Chloe, go for it!!
— Jul 18, 2016 05:20PM
Elithanathile
is 9% done
// Better. Much, much better :-). I can already tell Chloe is a sweetheart and I adore Derick, her brother, too :-)!! I just know I'll want to give Heath THEE biggest hug ever ... and keep wanting to do it :-)!! So far so good!
— Jul 18, 2016 04:24PM
