maren’s Reviews > Forget Me Not > Status Update

right, so i actually think i will like the story, however not sure if i’ll be able to get into the writing.
like why is basically the MMCs pov written in the FMCs pov? it doesn’t make sense at all.

„After Silas left Logan and I in the common area, he circled the ship twice on foot just to calm his own racing pulse.”

like she is not there in the moment, she doesn’t see him or anything. fucking weird