Mikaela’s Reviews > Wild Dark Shore > Status Update
Mikaela
is 82% done
narrative tension generated by dangling a secret in front of the reader and then refusing to let them in on it is, imo, the laziest kind—mechanical and withholding instead of organic and taut. HOWEVER i did not see that plot twist coming at all so props for sticking the landing on the reveal at least
— Mar 15, 2025 06:20PM
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