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Nicole
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"'I. Do. Not. Need. A. Bodyguard,' I repeat, a little louder this time. I could give two fucks who hears me." you mean you COULDN'T
— Mar 16, 2025 03:22AM
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Nicole
is 13% done
The word "fuck" appears every five pages and ironically it makes the story seem less mature.
"You fought at Strythmore," the rider behind the desk says with awe. "They gave you the Order of the Talon for taking out that battery behind enemy lines." What is that exposition?
The MC infodumped about the worldbuilding to calm herself. Help
The dialogue makes me cringe—it's so millenial-core. "Volun-told," really?
— Mar 10, 2025 12:42AM
"You fought at Strythmore," the rider behind the desk says with awe. "They gave you the Order of the Talon for taking out that battery behind enemy lines." What is that exposition?
The MC infodumped about the worldbuilding to calm herself. Help
The dialogue makes me cringe—it's so millenial-core. "Volun-told," really?
