Lisa Cummings’s Reviews > Delta Salvation > Status Update

Navy SEALS say Hooyah, not Hoorah. Does this author know anything about the Navy or D SEALS? She shouldn't write about stuff she knows NOTHING about because it is just irritating. Not to mention, she has thrown pretty much EVERY cliche' possible into this book. It's CRAP!!! I am 68% through it and it has yet to make ANY sense. GRRRRRRRR.......

This book STINKS! This is written around Navy SEALS, but this author has a Captain reporting to a Commander which is a lower RANK!!! She has thrown the Posse Comitatus Act out the window. She also has the "Commander" calling the "Captain" a soldier except they are SAILORS, and in real life, they're kinda prickly about that. The story has yet to take any shape, and this author desperately needs an editor.