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Problems I had with this book:
1. So many typos and errors. This needs an editor asap.
2. She’s a ballerina but she has paparazzi? Ballet dancers don’t get that kind of attention (unless they’re dating someone famous or have a big social media platform but that’s not Marion)
3. Marion is not trying to understand what the heck is going on with her ‘driver’ and is nonplussed by getting kidnapped??
— Jun 20, 2025 10:03PM
1. So many typos and errors. This needs an editor asap.
2. She’s a ballerina but she has paparazzi? Ballet dancers don’t get that kind of attention (unless they’re dating someone famous or have a big social media platform but that’s not Marion)
3. Marion is not trying to understand what the heck is going on with her ‘driver’ and is nonplussed by getting kidnapped??

