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So far, I’m not feeling it. The writing doesn’t match the period, and the FMC’s personality feels underdeveloped. The ‘spicy’ scenes seem forced and come out of nowhere. The only thing keeping me invested is uncovering the MMC’s real story—I have some theories about it.
— Mar 17, 2025 07:11AM
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Mar 17, 2025 07:13AM
and the trials aint that creative /:
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