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Oh my, there is 8 times used word "annnnd" with 4 n's. I really don't think that so funny. It's 8 times too many.
Mar 19, 2025 11:04AM
Restless Spirit (Hell Hounds Harem, #1)

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Nix Kharon
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I don't like. It is badly written, I have rolled my eyes of everytime there is word with to many letters (sooo, annnd, ooooh). Stupid sentences. One. Word. Sentences. Dialogue doesn't work. Trying to be funny, but is not.
And it was unlogical what Jack told her at the beginning "oh I can't tell you what I am, it will afraid you". Yeah right.
Defenitely there is similarities with Four Psykos. Except FP is better.
Mar 19, 2025 01:41PM
Restless Spirit (Hell Hounds Harem, #1)


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