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Woof

Decent set up...then what happened? Lets try everything! Lets cut out the female lead. Whats the goal? Whats the resolution?

If "City" or "Way Station" is peak Simack, then this isnt even approaching an incline to to the peak
Mar 21, 2025 10:34PM
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"I suppose," the Devil said, "that you are wondering now what can be done about it."

"Precisely," said the President.
"You can put an end to all this foolishness. You can halt the Lil Abners and the Mickey Mouses and the Howdy Doodies. You can return to honest fantasy. You can think about some evil things and others that are good and you can believe in them . . :
Mar 21, 2025 09:54PM
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