Matt’s Reviews > Fragments of Fear > Status Update
Matt
is 93% done
Second time I've caught what seems to be the author mixing up the names of their own characters/locations.. ie this lady in the town of Somerset telling the detective he must have had a long drive over from Somerset.. Errors like that make me wonder if a book was ever edited, by anyone. How do you miss the detective character saying "race you to the car!" and taking off instead of his 10 year old son 😅
— Mar 21, 2025 04:50PM
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Matt
is 60% done
ok when I say this feels like a first draft, I mean, this random throwaway character with one line has her name awkwardly injected into the sentence and then never mentioned again for the whole book. I stopped and searched it because her introduction was so random and rushed and this character just never occurs again lol
— Mar 20, 2025 05:29PM
