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is on page 43 of 320
Okay, that's the second example of inappropriate tense shift in like 3 pages. Ms Reid my editing rates are v reasonable
— Mar 22, 2025 08:30PM
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J.
is on page 150 of 320
I remember Javed Akhtar once said "American movies are short stories, while Indian movies are novels." This book is the print equivalent of an American Amazon Prime show. Very little interiority, repetitious in what thoughts it does show, and with unnecessary exposition for things that are readily apparent to anyone not on their phone simultaneously.
— Mar 24, 2025 09:07AM
J.
is on page 32 of 320
Glad we're not waiting to get to the important stuff, i.e. kissing 😂
— Mar 18, 2025 10:47PM
J.
is on page 17 of 320
I love that Celeste has a Girl in the Chair. Her dynamic with Beatrice is fun.
— Mar 16, 2025 11:53PM
