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“Creator” is used over 25 times in this book. It is already annoying tf out of me.
— Mar 23, 2025 08:26AM
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Mom Reads Romance
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So far this book is really disconnected and spiraling due to the writing being very repetitive.
We are only getting the thoughts inside the fmc’s head. I get it, she cannot speak. But that would have been a great opportunity for 3rd person. It would have made the story infinitely more interesting and palatable.
— Mar 23, 2025 06:55AM
We are only getting the thoughts inside the fmc’s head. I get it, she cannot speak. But that would have been a great opportunity for 3rd person. It would have made the story infinitely more interesting and palatable.
