Kathrine’s Reviews > Half Moon Bay > Status Update
Kathrine
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ugh. talk, talk, talk. All about something. Something the author doesn't think the reader needs to know. There are better ways to create suspense.
— Jul 27, 2016 07:35AM
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Kathrine
is on page 180 of 380
I can't quite figure out if Ellie is really that naive or if she's just dumb.
— Jul 28, 2016 11:22AM
Kathrine
is on page 104 of 380
I think there's a plot in there somewhere. It's just hiding under all the useless, distracting chatter and characters.
— Jul 19, 2016 09:17AM
Kathrine
is on page 56 of 380
So Ellie is supposedly this intelligent, insightful world traveling pro photographer and yet when around any one from home, she can't see the forest through the trees.
— Jul 13, 2016 12:17PM
