Sadie Forsythe’s Reviews > Taming Heather > Status Update

I can't with the cutesy word tummy in both sex scenes and threats of violence. Nope

The description, "his insides hardened" or "everything inside him hardened" or "he hardened inside" keeps being used (over and over and over again). What do you figure that actually means?

There seems to be some sort of apocalyptic heat wave going on in this book, because this man's blood has boiled about a hundred times.

"You don't date enough as it is. And this one, with that aggressive side. Sounds like you'd he a fool to pass him up."

Being as the speaker doesn't know he's a werewolf, I can't for the life of me [yes, that phrase was purposeful] figure out how this makes sense.

And we won't touch the grammar.

Pg 100 and it's just mentioned for the first time that the brothers are twins. Twins that look enough alike that they swap places with women in bed to see if they can tell the difference. This despite the difference in appearance (and personality) being described 40 or so pages ago.

Names.
We have four werewolves in a room.
Three brothers named Marc, Stone and Gabe.
Then the fourth, named Rock, who's not related.
WTF?
How can Rock and Stone not be related?

Masterbating with a hairbrush handle? *wrinkles nose*

I'm not sure pubic hair can be described as downy, especially paired with the adjective thick—downy, thick hair. Maybe it's just me, but....

It's gonna take me a while to get through this book if I keep having stop to quote the dumb.

"For some reason it hadn't crossed her mind that a werewolf might be more intelligent than she. The knowledge sent a wave of foolishness rushing through her. Why wouldn't they be? She was far from the smartest human on the planet."

So, she's stupid? Or he's just smarter? That's gonna make her hard to relate to for me.

'...she shouldn't be sweating. The night air was chilly enough, not to mention the temperature out here was probably close to freezing."

So, is it just chilly or freezingly cold?