Rebekah Ackerman’s Reviews > The Quiet Unraveling of Eve Ellaway > Status Update
Rebekah Ackerman
is starting
The logic isn’t logic-ing
Finally meets long-lost sister: never calls her.
We don’t bring sister to meet mom
Suddenly there’s an investigation in which the VICTIMS are questioned as possible suspects??
Main character is mad at dad for charade—even though MC is 18 and could’ve rebelled a long time ago
It’s obvious writer is pushing the story where it doesn’t logically flow just to meet her plotted end
— Apr 01, 2025 05:23AM
Finally meets long-lost sister: never calls her.
We don’t bring sister to meet mom
Suddenly there’s an investigation in which the VICTIMS are questioned as possible suspects??
Main character is mad at dad for charade—even though MC is 18 and could’ve rebelled a long time ago
It’s obvious writer is pushing the story where it doesn’t logically flow just to meet her plotted end
Like flag
Rebekah’s Previous Updates
Comments Showing 1-1 of 1 (1 new)
date
newest »
newest »
message 1:
by
Rebekah
(new)
-
rated it 2 stars
Apr 01, 2025 05:24AM
85% percent done
reply
|
flag

