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Nancy
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2) Grav was supposed to check on both women. He chose to see Leah first, and step in at just the right time but once he had her, why didn't he put her on his ship then go visit Charlotte? 3) I'm pretty sure he left "alien evidence" in Leah's house...the message cubes. That means he may have blown the lid off the "no aliens" belief.
— Aug 06, 2016 04:02AM
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Nancy
is 49% done
I'm starting to really dislike "darlin'". Wish he would quit that. Also this whole "I'll heal you" stuff and being so noble is getting annoying and awkward...not to mention a tad ridiculous.
— Aug 10, 2016 03:41PM
Nancy
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4) now Leah is just being dense! Why do you want me to wear this cape that totally covers me up? Is it because of the skimpy clothes I'm wearing?...might be because he already told you it's a dangerous place, but you insisted you go with him...he gave in despite his better judgement and now he wants to hide you a bit...well Derr!
— Aug 06, 2016 04:05AM
Nancy
is 23% done
I have a few things going on in the real world at the moment so I have taken days to get to 23%, but I haven't really felt driven to keep reading either. So far I've had a couple of issues with the story. 1) I know the author is probably trying to handle the "abusive partner" sensitively but I'm finding it almost...cliche? Like an article about abusive partners.
— Aug 06, 2016 04:01AM
