Gisele Walko’s Reviews > Miscegenist Sabishii > Status Update

I'm in love with this story, I truly am but it's still hard to overlook the editing :( Pepper Pace is still one of my favorites.

The story is really good.

First of all, good story. I like Tony and Nikki. The editing issues are getting a little bit better. The part I'm reading has so many exclamation points that I just started cracking up. It's like I'm being yelled at, and it's just the internal dialogue.

The story is so good that I'm not noticing the mistakes so much. I did cringe a little at the use of breaks instead of brakes, but I'll live through it.

Do I love the story? Absolutely, the characters are well-rounded, and funny and they are unlikely as a couple, which I love, but the editing issues in this are distracting. Missing words, the wrong word, etcetera etcetera. I'm hoping these lessen later in the book.