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Makayla
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Ah yes, the classic flirting of threatening to kill your slave's maternal figure if she tries to run away. Very romantic
— Apr 12, 2025 09:40AM
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Makayla
is on page 62 of 400
"It's kinda thrilling" NO BABE ITS NOT. HE KIDNAPPED YOU AND ENSLAVED YOU AFTER KILLING YOUR ADOPTIVE FAMILY. YOU SHPULD WANT TO KICK HIS ASS NOT THINK ABOUT HIS CHEEKBONES.
— Apr 11, 2025 08:45AM
Makayla
is on page 51 of 400
Oh yikes yikes yikes. I meed our main girl to get a BACKBONE AND SOME SENSE. Stop thinking how dreamy he is! Bitch, he killed your family and kidnapped you! He made you a slave! This is WHACK even for insta-love. This isn't the TIME NOR PLACE for insta-love. And I say that as someone who usually likes the trope!
— Apr 10, 2025 06:53PM
Makayla
is on page 16 of 400
We are 16 pages in and I have a bad feeling. This is supposed to be adult romantasy. Why is the FMC a minor? And a sexy dancer one at that??? What's wrong with making adult characters?
— Apr 10, 2025 05:38PM
