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Even before the page count begins, there's a piece of text, and the very first sentence is:
"Wirr," he said in vague surprise, swinging the door wide enough to let his blond-haired friend's athletic frame through. "What are you doing here?"
I have 2 questions:
1. What is vague surprise?
2. Was it really necessary to use all those adjectives? "blond-haired friend's athletic frame", that's a lot all at once.
— Apr 13, 2025 01:11PM
"Wirr," he said in vague surprise, swinging the door wide enough to let his blond-haired friend's athletic frame through. "What are you doing here?"
I have 2 questions:
1. What is vague surprise?
2. Was it really necessary to use all those adjectives? "blond-haired friend's athletic frame", that's a lot all at once.
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"And a lot of them don't understand that persistence won't change my mind."
Wirr frowned. "They won't leave you alone?"
Dezia shook her head. "Several of them were apparently told by their father's to woo me at all costs. I've had more expressions of undying love in the last few months than I would want to see in a lifetime."
— Apr 17, 2025 01:30PM
Wirr frowned. "They won't leave you alone?"
Dezia shook her head. "Several of them were apparently told by their father's to woo me at all costs. I've had more expressions of undying love in the last few months than I would want to see in a lifetime."
