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Onyx Storm feels rather meandering compared to the previous two books. While I maintain all three books could stand to be cut in half, the first two had a much stronger momentum in both character and plot. Onyx Storm just lacks a clear sense of going somewhere, or that it has new ways to escalate.
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Onyx Storm (The Empyrean, #3)

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