beril’s Reviews > My Lady Jane > Status Update

the story started very fluid. I was so curious for the further chapters and having fun, but the writing, the characters and the plot became very immature at some point. I still wonder how it will end but I did not understand the hype when the book first come out, of course it can be the difference of time, too. Lastly, I really do not like authors intervening the story with a perky paragraph that could be a footnote.