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15/5 so i wasn't planning on dnfing this but... i keep getting confused about characters countries and idk if I'm just dumb or the author is contradicting herself. the povs are basically the same. kaye's motivations are dumb. why does tristan? exist.
the writing is .. not great. i just keep being told and then i did this and saw this and smelt this and I'm OVER IT idk how long i can keep going ;-(

— Apr 15, 2025 06:18AM

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ren is on page 140 of 368

24/5 eesh i started this up again but. this is just not written well. i will see how far i can push through

— May 24, 2025 07:51AM

ren is on page 60 of 368

14/4. i was so excited by the concept of sapphic Rapunzel retelling with vampires. this is more like a lesson in how to write poorly but 'inspired by Tangled' :-(
the plot is ... fine? nothing has really happened there's a lot of infodumping. the stuff with the step dad could've been explored way more and been cool. idk if I'm finding errors or i just don't get it.

— Apr 15, 2025 06:15AM