Cari L. Pedstelak’s Reviews > The Cahokian > Status Update

Sad. Could've been a wonderful book had it not been for awful editing (or complete lack of editing). It hurts me to have to say such a thing, but the truth is that I'm not overly picky about a few errors here & there, however, this was so bad as to truly inhibit my enjoyment of the book. :(

Version I re-downloaded from Smashwords hoping it would be updated/edited isn't. Still a good story being chopped apart & difficult to read due to all the errors. Very depressing as this tale has so much potential. :(

An updated review says it's now been edited & is less choppy, so I re-downloaded it. Resuming reading in hopes this will resolve the issue. Zoe Saadia truly is telling a good & well-researched story here, but the poor editing was causing reading it to be an experience akin to listening to your favorite song on a warped & scratched record.