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Audiobook S1ut
Audiobook S1ut is 40% done
Okay, the writing... Isn't great. I'm still intrigued enough by the plot to forge ahead, but, oof, there's a lot of suspension of disbelief involved in the reality that these characters seem to inhabit as well, so, along with the subpar writing, has me stalling a bit.

It's so..ugh.. when the tough Mafia guy says 'I have no human feelings or frailty' like big scary goons don't even reflect like that
May 01, 2025 11:54PM
Petrichor (Mafia Babes, #1)

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Audiobook S1ut
Audiobook S1ut is 45% done
I DNF'd the physical book a while ago, but when I saw that the same two narrators who did Dysfunctional by Isabel Lucero narrated this book, I had to try it again. So far so good, but i will say.. some people should lose the right to use adverbs. Adverbs are a privilege to be used sparingly, and this author is abusing that privilege
Dec 06, 2025 10:24PM
Petrichor (Mafia Babes, #1)


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