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is 30% done
Yeah I’m tossing in the towel!
I’m a fan of a visually descriptive book but this just killed any interest in this story. I forgot what was going on since every minute detail had to be described.
I thought she was gonna note which foot the FMC put in-front of the other and how many blades of grass the lawn had.
Not even Troy Durans narration could make me go on… DNF.
— May 02, 2025 09:58PM
I’m a fan of a visually descriptive book but this just killed any interest in this story. I forgot what was going on since every minute detail had to be described.
I thought she was gonna note which foot the FMC put in-front of the other and how many blades of grass the lawn had.
Not even Troy Durans narration could make me go on… DNF.
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Bergströms Bookshelf
is 20% done
But do we really need to know each teeny tiny detail these characters do?! At one moment I thought she was gonna note which foot the FMC was standing on and how many forks were at the table. I’m a fan of a visually descriptive author but this just killed any interested in this story. I forgot what was going on since every minute detail had to be described.
— May 02, 2025 09:50PM
