Cassandra’s Reviews > Bloodguard > Status Update

Bad, just Bad. They now talk about politics and even as a noob in that field I can tell you, bullshit. Like half the time Robson establishes character dynamics, just to forget about them one paragraph later. And once again I ask, WHO PROFREAD THIS MESS?

I just read 20 pages of him in the arena and i have one question, who profread this???? Like holy shit, all the time i could not tell for the life of mine, what he was doing? Like he is underwater but can hear what happens outside? Why the fuck did he kill that couple? I just... i don't even know what exactly the point of this fight was. Like that was bad, bad in every way possible.

Ok, this has potential but the wrting style... oh my god, i wish i were blind. The best way to discribe it is cringe. Like the worldbuliding and behaiviour of the characters are bad, but if, if the writing style Was just less cringe, i could live whith it. When it's like this though? Bad, really Bad.