Marlene’s Reviews > Knock Down Dragon Out > Status Update
Marlene
is 79% done
I don't like how everything happened so fast, I would have liked to have them get to know each other before they started having sex and claiming each other. She was injured, and they still didn't wait. He didn't explain anything to her at all. This story had potential, but I feel the author did a poor job of telling the story and pacing it, so it was interesting for the reader. Delay gratification and restraint.
— May 05, 2025 05:27PM
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