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"The two of them stood side by side staring out over the dance floor with fingers entwined like a pinky swear and Zach more than a little in love."
Aug 22, 2016 07:06AM
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Not a bad read at all. A couple of minor things didn't ring true, face slapping being one of them... Sorry, laughing again...

*3.75 Stars*

Aug 23, 2016 01:25AM
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"You're also appointed official BLT liaison for the department or whatever it is."

"Er, LGBTQ?" Zach suggested.


I don't know, BLT liaison sounds very tasty to me. *Grin*

Aug 22, 2016 05:13PM
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Two grown men slapping each other around the face? I think punches would be more likely. Probably not quite as funny from my point of view though.
Aug 21, 2016 05:27PM
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I don't like Zach much. I think he is a resentful, closeted man, taking his frustrations out on others who don't deserve it.

Get over yourself, Zach.

Aug 21, 2016 10:19AM
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Poor Zach, all that sexual frustration is making him very prick-ly.

Sorry! That was a very bad pun.

Aug 21, 2016 07:19AM
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Well! Hello there gorgeous...I mean...Dante...

*SIGH*

Aug 20, 2016 04:06PM
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