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is 8% done
the writing is driving me crazy
"But there's something else about this room. Something that's bothering me."
"There's something about this room that's making a little ball of dread form in the pit of my stomach."
"There was something about that room that was very scary."
"There's something in his expression that sends a chill down my spine."
in the first chapter, just paragraphs apart. pls use other words!
— May 11, 2025 01:42AM
"But there's something else about this room. Something that's bothering me."
"There's something about this room that's making a little ball of dread form in the pit of my stomach."
"There was something about that room that was very scary."
"There's something in his expression that sends a chill down my spine."
in the first chapter, just paragraphs apart. pls use other words!
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