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Ok, I don't usually write reviews. This book has a good premise, but it needs serious editing.
The flipping from 1st person to 2nd person to 3rd person is distracting. Grammer, spelling and punctuation all need work as well.
— Aug 25, 2016 11:32AM
The flipping from 1st person to 2nd person to 3rd person is distracting. Grammer, spelling and punctuation all need work as well.
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