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Adrian
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"Aleco knew she hated him, probably wanted to kill him, and was certainly frightened of him..."
Why? He has rescued her. given her money, and not really done anything bad to her. Why does he "know" these things?
— Aug 25, 2016 10:53PM
Why? He has rescued her. given her money, and not really done anything bad to her. Why does he "know" these things?
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Adrian
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"Aleco leaned over and inserted himself within her, and she gasped at his entrance and pulled him deeper."
It has been really hard to like the characters and connect to the story because everything is told in such a matter of fact way. There's a disconnect that I've had issues with.
— Aug 28, 2016 12:33PM
"Aleco leaned over and inserted himself within her, and she gasped at his entrance and pulled him deeper."
It has been really hard to like the characters and connect to the story because everything is told in such a matter of fact way. There's a disconnect that I've had issues with.
Adrian
is on page 247 of 304
page 247/258
"Aleco leaned over and inserted himself within her, and she gasped at his entrance and pulled him deeper."
It has been really hard to like the characters and connect to the story because everything is told in such a matter of fact way. There's a disconnect that I've had issues with.
— Aug 28, 2016 12:00PM
"Aleco leaned over and inserted himself within her, and she gasped at his entrance and pulled him deeper."
It has been really hard to like the characters and connect to the story because everything is told in such a matter of fact way. There's a disconnect that I've had issues with.
Adrian
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PG 12/258
The author must have gotten a thesaurus for Christmas. Ugh. It seems like every sentence has at least one 8+ letter word in it. I'm not scared of large words but it just seems rather unnecessary, like the author is going out of her way to include these words. Some of the descriptions are too wordy. They just sound awkwardly long.
— Aug 25, 2016 10:12PM
The author must have gotten a thesaurus for Christmas. Ugh. It seems like every sentence has at least one 8+ letter word in it. I'm not scared of large words but it just seems rather unnecessary, like the author is going out of her way to include these words. Some of the descriptions are too wordy. They just sound awkwardly long.
