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Not looking good. Ashe had created distinct personalities and distinct skill sets for the protags, but this book threw all that into the fire. Sommers could be talking abt being subtle one moment then become a blundering idiot in the next, and Hazard would attempt some cringe gestures meant to comfort which is just jarring. The premise of the murder was also dumb af; Sommers' incompetence was just impossible.
— May 13, 2025 03:43AM
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Maya
is on page 347 of 434
Was (still am) very frustrated at the emotional immaturity that srsly hindered the investigation (I came into the story expecting crime with romance as side plot, but the dudes were so annoyingly fixated on their relationship). But then Daisy appeared and I was immediately hooked. The plot development after that is pure gold. Reminds me of why I'd decided to get book 2 as soon as I finished book 1.
— May 20, 2025 11:38PM
