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shreya
shreya is 18% done
10 chapters in, it's going good so far. i just wish we got more showing instead of telling when it comes to his feelings. how did it all start? show it. writing about the 'depth' of his feelings in different pretty sentences does nothing for me.
May 13, 2025 04:34AM
King of Envy (Kings of Sin, #5)

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shreya is 49% done
thinking of an affair is crazy
May 15, 2025 12:07PM
King of Envy (Kings of Sin, #5)


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