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The way this is written gives me much more confidence in my own writing.

Like its js bad.

Exhibit A: Using the word 'said' even though the book is written in present tense?

Exhibit B: Using says almost all the time. Like in chapter 1 alone, the says to anything other than said ratio is 39:2.. like what???

Exhibit C: the writing style low-key sucks. like every sentence is poorly written and bland.

I do NOT want to hear about Father Paul's encounter with a succubus.