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The tempo just feels so off, I can’t tell what the author wants to emphasize because there’s something new happening every two pages. Just felt so unorganized but easy to follow because there was little depth to any of the revelations. Also, the author hates the protag?? Why is she getting bullied every single page? You can’t make her poor and then make every character violently hate poor people. So unnecessary
— May 20, 2025 02:03PM

