Larissa Norton’s Reviews > Shiver > Status Update

Resumed around 10pm May 19, 25 and paused at midnight. Still good. Getting tired of a few tendencies in her writing at this point but still intrigued in the story. Sometimes monologues go on too long, sentence structure gets odd at times, and some dialogue doesn’t seem to be fully realistic. I’m also wondering if this part of the story is lacking some depth or background/side info regarding the situation, etc.