Linnea’s Reviews > The Book of Doors > Status Update
Linnea
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The story is solid. The writing has room for improvement
— May 20, 2025 07:01PM
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Linnea
is on page 272 of 418
Wait I’m sorry. Just read a sentence “he loves her” after they’ve known each other for approx 12 hours. to each their own but good grief do we need to force extra romance that bad? The STORY IS FINE ON ITS OWN
— May 20, 2025 08:53PM
Linnea
is on page 271 of 418
I like analogies. Love them! But why would you use one like “the gaze of a cat that had just left a dead animal on the doorstop” after someone kills someone? I request better creativity in analogies thru the whole book
— May 20, 2025 08:51PM
Linnea
is on page 41 of 418
Intrigued & excited for a new story, even if the writing isn’t as poetic or artistic as my faves
— May 18, 2025 10:07PM

