Freddie🏳️⚧️🐀’s Reviews > Twelfth Grade Night > Status Update
Freddie🏳️⚧️🐀
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My vibes are already kinda off on this. The fairy girl is annoying and I hope she doesn't stick around. Worldbuilding is non existent. I gen had no idea this was a fantasy until I opened the book, based on the cover you'd assume it's just a normal high school right? I mean I love love love fantasy but is this just a normal kid going to fantasy school? Also why is a 400 year old fairy at high school?
— May 23, 2025 09:32AM
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Freddie🏳️⚧️🐀
is 50% done
Okay I think I actually like this? It has alot of flaws but it has alot of charm.
— May 23, 2025 10:06AM
Freddie🏳️⚧️🐀
is on page 16 of 160
Also the like fairy and mortal thing is annoying like heyits basically the popular rich kid antagonists with another coat of paint and even worse like if you're a human why go to Arden high if you're just gonna get like called weak and useslllss. HS is already bad enough for ppl man
— May 23, 2025 09:43AM
Freddie🏳️⚧️🐀
is on page 15 of 160
UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
and there it is dead parent! Can we stop with the dead parent trope. Please it just shows me that you don't know how to write characters. It's a cheap way for you to feel bad and root for the character. I know yes this is something that kids have to face sometimes. But like damn there sure are a lot of dead parents in media.
— May 23, 2025 09:35AM
and there it is dead parent! Can we stop with the dead parent trope. Please it just shows me that you don't know how to write characters. It's a cheap way for you to feel bad and root for the character. I know yes this is something that kids have to face sometimes. But like damn there sure are a lot of dead parents in media.
