malin’s Reviews > Onyx Storm > Status Update
malin
is on page 171 of 527
place name upon place name i have no idea of where they are or where they’re going bro
— May 25, 2025 01:13PM
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malin
is on page 320 of 527
so much is happening i wish the escalation was more deliberate. its all over the place atm
— May 26, 2025 04:18AM
malin
is on page 252 of 527
i can’t bring myself to care. ofc they’re going on ANOTHER mission. ugh. how is this even ending idk what kind of payoff could satisfy atp
— May 25, 2025 03:27PM
malin
is on page 81 of 527
random side plots. random characters. random dreams. stakes non-existent. tf is this
— May 25, 2025 07:45AM
malin
is on page 60 of 527
so much and absolutely nothing going on at the same time? just dialogue scene upon dialogue scene and the chapters are blurring together… the potential of this series really did die with iron flame it seems but we’ll see
— May 23, 2025 02:37AM
malin
is on page 35 of 527
why is every chapter ending on a mini cliffhanger when the scene literally continues the next page
— May 23, 2025 01:58AM
