T.J.’s Reviews > Fate of the Five: Veil of Vasara > Status Update

If Elias and Shadae end up developing a romance, I’m going to throw up in my mouth

This book being nearly 700 pages should have told me everything I needed to know about whatever editing it’s had lmao. I mean, it’s actually quite good so far, but my inner pedant is screaming at every other sentence

The lack of commas where they’re needed and the inclusion of commas where they shouldn’t be is driving me nuts

Does anyone ever actually read all the pages and pages of information fantasy writers include at the start of the book? I cbaaaaaa